Gale Kaguya {DONE}

the medical ninjas are the most essential in a battle in for ninjas to last long in battle and do not disregard them as lowest level

Leaf needs a New Hokage and since i made the leader system no one can actually just claim it, So the village must decide an Rp in the Hokage building should be created as a meeting of sorts or you can vote somewhere else..
Read here for more info:https://shinobi-alliance.rpg-board.net/rules-f4/leadership-system-t352.htm

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Name:
Gale Kaguya
Nickname:

Age:
16
Gender:
Male
Rank:
Jounin
Former Rank:

Village: -
Amegakure {Village Hidden in the Rain}
Former Village:
-
Affiliations:

Elements:
Primary Element: Lightning
Secondary Element: Wind

Kekke Genkai:
The main capabilities of Shikotsumyaku is allowing the user to manipulate their bones' growth. This allows them to create weapons of bones that can either protrude from any part of the body, or pulled out and used like hand held weapons. They can even fire pieces of their bones as long-ranged projectiles. Any bone that they remove from the body immediately regenerates, as does the skin that is damaged when the bones are removed. Users can increase the density of the created bones, making them stronger than steel. This not only makes the created weapons very powerful, but also makes their bodies virtually indestructible.

From what the only known user of this ability, Kimimaro, has shown, most of the techniques are named after flowers. Most of them are also taijutsu-based sword dances, which are used for close combat and defense. However, as Kimimaro demonstrated, the bones can also be forced to grow from the ground, as a form of a ninjutsu, and that he can emerge from any of these bones.
Personality:
As a child he was suppose to be born in the mist village, there he would learn to be a born and bread killer but due to him being born in the Rain village he would turn out more different. He is a very calm one, he keeps himself cool at all times. And so if he is in a mission he gets that done before anything else. He is highly loyal to anyone he serves, once finding out about his clan he have a hatered towards them but he keeps quite and just waits untill he have his chance.
Appearance:
Head:
On his head he has long and beautiful hair.He doesn't wear any of that pirecing or ear rings.He has no scars on his face.Just a plain face.Although girls find him cute.He has no marks or scratchs.He has good tone and none pale skin.

Body:
On his arms he have no markings.His skin is toned.He is a very flexible and musular boy,or some say teenager.He once in a while wears gauntlets.The gauntlets increase his punching power by sending a static force into his opponent when connects with his opponent.But he only wears them once in a while.He wears a black Samurai like shirt.

Legs:
His legs are normal legs.Although he trained them to be one of the most deadly weapon of all.At first glance it may seem like normal legs.But when he starts using them you can't eacape his fury.but he wears black samurai like pants.They are very light on him.

Other stuff:
well he doesn't have anything other then seals.They are weapon seals,when using his chakra he can activate them to summon any weapon he already has.The seals have ALOT of space.And he normaly have his spear and sword on it.He is about 6'0 in height and 121 lb in weight.

Bio:
Academy Ark:
Originally The famous Kaguya clan was homed in Kirigakure The Village Hidden in the Bloody Mist. Gale was suppose to be born with his clan and have a normal Kaguya life, But Gale great grandmother had certain "Problems" with one of the Elders so they banished her and her family from the clan. So She raised a family traveling until she came across Amegakure or The Village Hidden in the Rain. So Gale was born there instead of with his clan like a normal boy. As a boy he didn't know much about his bloodline but he went on with life like it was nothing. He didn't understand how he was going to make a actual living in life until he found out about the life of the shinobi. He found traveling and mind blowing battles to be highly interesting, with that in mind he joined the Rain Ninja academy and passed making it to gennin.

Gennin Ark:
As a gennin of the Rain village he was expected to be a highly skilled ninja even at his low ranking, in close combat he was at the top 5, but far range for him needed allot of work. So he was set as a "Rush Gennin" meaning his rank was to fight up close in missions, that was his occupation for the Rain village. He finally learned about his bloodline "The Bone Pathway", with this he was able to become stronger using it. His bloodline was strange to everyone because his clan was not known in the village, of course the elders knew what his clan was and had to keep a eye on him. They were guessing he would betray the village. With that in mind as his training went on and he continued to be watched. Once he was one of the best gennin, and after 6 months of nagging the Administrator's about giving him a monthly Bingo book even though they thought he wasn't ready he was automatically signed up for the chuunin exams, and giving a monthly supply of the international bingo book. Once he was there he was teamed up with 2 other gennin. As they got to the leaf village they realized they were allot more stronger then the other gennins. Or more smarter, Gale placed his hair down his bangs so they wouldn't be able to see his eyes. The rest of the squad was unknown. Gale passed the rest of the exams just barely showing amazing skill and power allowing him to gain the rank of Chuunin.

Chuunin Ark:
As a Chuunin he realized it was not about power anymore, more about how tactical he can be. He was sent on all kinds of crazy missions, such as protecting buildings, stealing from other villages, infiltration and just rarely assassination. He often was seen going to clubs and watching them dance, about a week later he was seen with a new technique. With this and the bingo book he was a pretty reliable ninja. It took allot of votes of high class jounin for Gale to become a jounin. He at this rank learned the assassination of his clan, his emotions were changed when it came to the mist village. But he choose not to show it. He see why he was not so blood thirsty, was because he wasn't with his clan members at all. He went around gaining votes until only one jounin wouldn't give him a vote. That is when he fought his first jounin. He never understood how he was going to do it, but the jounin challenged him to a fight for the vote. Gale put up a good fight but in the end he lose. But when he woke up he was given the last vote. The Amegakure leader place him under there wing after appointing him to jounin.

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Finished.

Subject: Re: Gale Kaguya {DONE} Sat May 29, 2010 1:08 am

Gravity release..no ...dont need a deva path wanna be...

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Redone!

Subject: Re: Gale Kaguya {DONE} Fri Jun 04, 2010 8:25 pm

S-Rank no..as last time from your RP sample chuunin level, and your Rps havent really improved since then so no

Alright now for the Kekke genkai: There is already a Doujutsu with an X in it on the forums that resemble cross-hairs dont need too many Kekke Genkais being too similar, the same kkg im talking about also has a "Lock-On" Ability so no

Mato Velocity, Mato Offering are jutsus they shouldn't be in the Kekke genkai descriptionput them in the jutsu list saying they need the Kekke genkai

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S-Rank no..as last time from your RP sample chuunin level, and your Rps havent really improved since then so no

Alright now for the Kekke genkai: There is already a Doujutsu with an X in it on the forums that resemble cross-hairs dont need too many Kekke Genkais being too similar, the same kkg im talking about also has a "Lock-On" Ability so no

Mato Velocity, Mato Offering are jutsus they shouldn't be in the Kekke genkai descriptionput them in the jutsu list saying they need the Kekke genkai

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First of All, It was funny the first few times you said I was Chuunin Level, but now its getting Rude. Im not a chuunin Level Rper, I SHOWED you a rping sample that you thought was Chuunin Level. And Let me show you another Sample Before giving final statements.

The Rest Im going to change the whole App.

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Rp Sample:
As the day was bright and people were worried about there village being attacked again. The attack was of 2 men that looked very much young. One was charging a large ball and the other was covering, but it was stopped by a mysterious man.And the attackers retreated from the village after the hero and the attacker said a few words. The ninjas of this village were increasing and being on guard and alert to protect the village hidden under the sand. You could see the ninjas walking around the gates and you can't see them but its hidden anbu black op members around in the shadows waiting for a move.

But other then that a small disk appeared at the west gate on top of it. many ninjas moved in. The disk was on the floor of the gate. It was yellow but the ninjas were on guard waiting for something to happen. It was a loud wind as they waited, some were scared and some were ready to die for there village. Which was loyalty of the village from a ninja which was something that was not bad for a ninja. Normally Sairento would appear, but the question is who were they expecting. The Kazekage was very worried for his village, some of the ninjas and anbus were able to get a good description of who the attackers were.

As noted before normally it was a person coming out the disk, but this time it was something completely different. Some of the ninjas closed in on the disk with there swords and weapons ready to defend there village as well as there life.Instead of a person a Kunai flew out of it.But it was no ordinary kunai,it was a kunai with a explosive tag on it. There it happened,a explosion which killed and injured quite a large amount of ninjas in the village. The villagers ran from the explosion to get to a safe place. What got them worried even more was after the explosion was a large amount of smoke which the ninjas of the village decided to charge in.

But either do they know it was someone there. The man was wearing all white but black hair and was standing there tall. The ninjas and villagers saw the man and knew he was one of the two men who attacked the village the last time. As the smoke was still lingering in the air the ANBU members took there chances and using speed alone ran in the smoke expecting to get a kill. The man was Sairento E. Kouseitan'i. In fact he was one of the man who attacked this village, he has done allot of things which made him famous. But Sairento use to live here, why would he attack it.When the ANBU black ops attacked they were quickly knocked into buildings and the gates were large image being knocked from the gate to a building.

The smoke completely cleared up and it was clear who the man was. The ANBU and Jounin knew who he was and stood there in silence. There was only one word you could hear through the whole village, and this word was spoken in great fear. His face had a frown on it as usual that one word was"Breaker". He was ready to destroy the village but instead of doing that he using Body flicker disappeared through sight, and shortly after appearing in the middle of the village and doing hand seals for some strange reason, no one knew what kind of jutsu he was going to do but he did it and when he was done it was a large seal on the ground. He had completed his mission and flickered to the tallest building in the village and using chakra projected his voice so it would be more then loud enough that the whole village could hear him."Alright,As you know I was the one who defended as well as attacked this village.This village is under the Shadow Knights.If a villagers have any objection all will be answered later.If a ninja wants to attack me to protect there village do it now...."He said as he pulled up a flag that had the Shadow Knight symbol on it and placed it on the gate and the whole gate transformed completely black.

Sairento's mission had been done and finished.He had training to do and he could not waste his time with the past.But he had to stand there for a moment, and looked down and remember "what use to be" He looked up to see 2 jounin in the air in attack stance to kill the young Kouseitan'i. Sairento did not expect it, he then remembered that there could be new ANBU members who never heard of him.Sairento sighed a moment before spinning around with his Kaguya bloodline activated and by the time they got close they were cut in many places and sent back all the way to the ground, from the largest building in the village to the ground.

Sairento thought that, it should show the sand village a tiny bit of a sample his power, the Shadow Knight power. And the power of redemption. He turned his body to the village as they look at his back.Sairento then vanished from the village with what he needed to do.

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Finished,

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Bump ._.

Subject: Re: Gale Kaguya {DONE} Sun Jun 13, 2010 3:17 pm

No Akatsuki Affiliations

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Done ._.

Subject: Re: Gale Kaguya {DONE} Mon Jun 14, 2010 6:17 pm

~APPROVED~

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